Seth K.
“A Brilliant Light”
Honorable Mention
Writing, ages 15–18
Inspired by: Cane made of wood from the USS Constitution
“Batten down the hatches! I want all hands on deck!” the sea captain commanded. A blinding light flashed, and a crack louder than an explosion rang out. It could have been heard hundreds of miles away, on the mainland.
“Reef the Mainsail!” the captain shouted again. “We’re making it out of this storm. We’ve too much to lose on this ship to just drown!” The seamen scurried around the deck, tying ropes of sails down on the deck, trying to control Mother Nature’s wicked torment. A surge of water infiltrated the deck, launching a man skyborne. He wailed as he soared through the air.
This was Peter’s third trip with the crew. He was fresh out of high school. He told the captain of his hopes, dreams, aspirations, and eagerness for the sea. The captain tries to maintain a strong leadership figure for his crewmates, but it is hard for him to deny the soft spot he had for the boy. Peter reminded the captain of himself when he was younger; excited, hardworking, and a little reckless at times. The captain’s jaw gaped as he watched his young prospect fly far over the ship. Suddenly, the storm paled.
As Peter flew through the air, time seemed to slow. The captain’s heart raced, and he shouted for the crew to try and spot where the boy might land. Milliseconds before Peter’s plunge into the dark, churning waters, a brilliant beam of light broke through the storm clouds. A strange hum filled the air. The crew shielded their eyes as the light enveloped Peter, suspending him inches above the water.
The light gently carried him back onto the deck, unharmed. The crew stared in disbelief as the storm began to calm, as though the mysterious light had tamed it. Still in shock, the captain approached Peter, who was equally bemused.
“Captain, what just happened?” Peter asked, his voice trembling.
“I don’t know, lad,” the captain replied, “but it seems you’ve been chosen for something far greater than this storm.”
Shaking off his shock, the captain quickly regained composure. “Men,” he started, “We need to get this ship back home. Secure the sails and set course!”
The crew, still stunned, snapped into action. They hoisted the mainsail, adjusted the rigging, and secured the deck. The captain returned to the helm and turned the wheel, steering the ship towards the distant shore. The mysterious light that saved Peter lingered in their minds, filling them with a sense of awe and determination.
The storm receded rapidly as if respecting the empyrean light. The once tumultuous sea calmed, and the ship sliced through the waves with ease. The crew worked diligently, their spirits lifted by the miracle they had just witnessed.
Still processing what had happened, Peter found himself hovering beside the captain. “Sir, what do you think that light was?”
The captain glanced at him, his eyes reflecting both wonder and uncertainty. “I can’t say for sure, Peter. But whatever it was, it saved you and gave us a chance to make it home. Let’s focus on getting this shipment back home. That’s our priority. Then we can try to understand what happened.”
Hours passed, and the coastline came into view. The familiar sight of the harbor brought a sigh of relief from the crew. As they approached the dock, the captain gave one final command.
“Prepare to dock!” He shouted. “Let’s bring her in smoothly, men.”
The crew expertly maneuvered the ship into the harbor. As they disembarked, the townsfolk gathered, eager for supplies and stories. The captain, Peter, and the crew recounted their harrowing experiences, leaving out no detail of the heavenly light.
Word quickly spread, and the tale became legendary. Scientists from the region visited to analyze the ship. Samples were taken, and tests were conducted, yet the mysterious light remained an unsolved enigma, a beacon of hope and mystery for the coming generations.
A silversmith found an odd energy imbued with some of the silver aboard. After profuse testing yielded inconclusive results, the silversmith molded the infused metal into a band and fixed it to a cane. He gifted the cane to the crew, a token of their resilience and divinity. Everyone on the crew unanimously agreed to grant it to Peter.
Having faced the sea’s fury and the wonder of the light, Peter knew his life had changed forever. He felt a deep sense of purpose and a connection to the sea that went beyond mere adventure. With the cane in one hand, the captain beside him, and crew at his back, he gazed over the calm waters, knowing his journey was just beginning, and the sea held many more secrets waiting to be discovered.